It is better to complete a project and then start another one than to do several things at the same time | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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It is better to complete a project and then start another one than to do several things at the same time.

It goes without saying that working on projects is one of the most important task of people in their course of study or in their professional lives. there has been a controversial debate as to whether handing in a project first and then starting another one is really helpful than working on several ones. From my perspective, completing a project and then doing other projects is more beneficial, and two reasons to support my viewpoint are elaborating upon hereunder.
To begin with, doing several projects simultaneously will have unintended consequences. It is not a secret to any one that experiencing anxiety is totally normal when human have an important duty to do; trying to work on several project at the same time, people will have trouble to take care of themselves well due to the fact that they will be preoccupying with a lot of thoughts, meaning they will therefore be overwhelmed with stress. Obviously, the amount of workload plays a significant role in this process, so having more job to do means having difficulty to cope with them. Rarely are people able to withstand the pressure of such an activity due to the fact that focusing will be so hard. Handing in some projects with different subject, individuals will be distracted and it may hurt their mental health. To put it in more vivid picture, when I was in college I decided to finish three assignments at the same time although I had difficulty concentrating. During working on my assignments I felt anxious as I was overwhelmed with stress, I therefore could not have devoted adequate time to reading my courses in examination time since I got depression, thus, as you can guess I had really unsatisfied scores that year. Had I not tried to do my assignments simultaneously, I would enable to get better scores in my materials.
Furthermore, finishing projects one by one, we are able to be more successful. It is crystal clear that handing in a project will give us a sense of satisfaction because we complete it and we reduced the amount of load and pressure that was on our shoulders and escape from the clutches of stress. As a result, we definitely will turn into more confident individuals who could finish a project, thereby, having more confidence, we will be capable to do other projects sooner and better in comparison with previous ones. For instance, my best friend Sara had to make three presentations during her education; although she is so introvert, Sara did great on all of her presentations because after making the first one she felt satisfied and it boosts her confidence, which enabled my best friends to speak in front of huge number of people confidentially. As you can see, passions arising after finishing a task are so strong that make us more motivated to do other duties as well as possible.
In sum, I am sure some would disagree with my opinion; dong project one by one is more beneficial. Not only will people enjoy mental health, they will also feel motivated to do their project better, which helps them to be more successful individuals in their lives

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...f study or in their professional lives. there has been a controversial debate as to w...
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Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
.... there has been a controversial debate as to whether handing in a project first and then sta...
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Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ded consequences. It is not a secret to any one that experiencing anxiety is totally no...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun project seems to be countable; consider using: 'several projects'.
Suggestion: several projects
...important duty to do; trying to work on several project at the same time, people will have trou...
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Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Rarely' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: Are Rarely
...ns having difficulty to cope with them. Rarely are people able to withstand the pressure o...
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Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re successful individuals in their lives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2542.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80529300567 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88589192153 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487712665406 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.9 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7392772097 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.222222222 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3888888889 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269086421121 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915441895577 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684824529457 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17673984465 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725426603604 0.0645574589148 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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