large or small universities?
Studying in university is one of the most exciting and memorable years of each person’s life. You can experience so many amazing things and as much as the university get bigger, you can have better and greater experiences. Some people thinks it is better to study in a small university which give them this chance to know almost everyone there, others prefer a large university which can provide bigger opportunities for them. In my view, large universities which have several thousand students are better and I would like to elaborate my opinion with following reasons.
First, we can meet more people and make bigger communications in large universities. When I was studying in bachelor’s degree, I was in a big university which had several thousand students and it was such an amazing opportunity for me. By studying in that big university, I had this chance to meet so many people and some of them became my best friends. These friends helped a lot after my graduation and I could start my own job thanks to them. Beside finding new friends, I had this chance to meet some well know professors of my academic major and they helped me to continue my education up to master’s degree level. In my view, having this chance to find so many good friends and having class with the best professors and experts of your field, is the thing which happens in large universities more than small universities with just few hundreds of students.
Second, big universities can provide better chances and opportunities for students. We all know Harvard university; a well know, big and wealthy university. This university provides full financial aids for lots of students each year and give them this chance to collaborate with big companies. Beside Harvard, almost all of large universities have this ability to provide better financial and educational situations for their student and this is one of the reasons which make large universities stand out of the box. I studied my master’s degree in a small university which had so many financial problems. I could not get any fund to do my thesis project and I had to do it self-funded which caused me some problems. Another problem I faced to, was the lack of needed equipment for my experiments and I had to ask some factories to let me do some part of my research in their labs. If I had this chance to study in a large university, I could probably ask university for some fund and do my research in bigger scale.
To cut the long story short, I want to conclude that big universities have deeper communication with industry and some big companies give notable amount of funds to them and ask them for a help. This can make large universities an amazing opportunity for those students who want to do some researches in big scales and have a connection with industry and real world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, well, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80855397149 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86215719109 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423625254582 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.072757358 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.05 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.55 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27732152468 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104896686974 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964194728513 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210249135879 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069840806403 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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