Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Nowadays, new staffs for people has gotten widespread, and these kinds of staff have influenced people life. Regard this fact, there is a controversial question expressing, now, life is much easier than before. I agree with the idea of has been comfortable life than in past decades. The reasons to substantiate my idea is explored in the following.
To begin with, there are many easier ways to transport and commute these days than the days, in the past. To put on the other hand, our grandparents have to use low-level transportation in comparison with their children. It is crystal clear, people, in the past, do not access to some transportation like bus or subway but now with the help of new technology, these are available for us. A personal experience of mine can drive this fact home. I am going to speak about my grandfather who used to sell his crops, at the end of each year. Using animals was the main way for him to transport the crops. He had been using animals for several years, until one of the people of the rural area, bought a new car. Decreasing the time of transportation, was the first and foremost consequence of the new decision of the guy. After a while, everyone bought a car for transporting the crops and my grandfather did too. My grandfather had faced these difficulties because the people, in the past, did not have these types of technology.
Furthermore, today people have easy ways not only in using transportation but also in communicating with each other. To be specific, everyone who wants to see a friend or tries to make an appointment with a major person has an amazing opportunity to reach the goal. As an illustration, my uncle has been studying computer science in Canada, since he finished his university in Iran. Once upon a time, while he was preparing to come back to Iran, he bought a cellphone for my grandmother and when he arrived in Iran, he thought my grandmother how to make a video call with the phone. This happen has influenced the relationship of this mother and her son and make the life of my grandmother easier. If my uncle never had bought a phone for my car, they would not see each other every week.
In conclusion, I do believe, today, life is much easier than before. Since people can have easier transportation and also an easier relationship with each other.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66990291262 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83184407936 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519417475728 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1057971004 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4545454545 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151819437883 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507974007371 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064109721764 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122156444719 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628686094642 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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