living today is much more easoier than when your parents were children
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that with the medrenization and globilization world picrture is entirely changed to what it was half a centuryt ago. In this regard, developemnet of technology and advancement of soceity is of paramount importance. Ther are different school of thoughs among people. Where some sconsider that living in a society of a century ago provides more quality of life, others contemplate that todays life is most comfotable because of the ease that tchnology has provided. As for this writer' opinion, I subscribe to the latter idea. I will delve into most crucial resons to substantiate my viewpoint.
THe first reason behind my rationale is rooted in the fact that with the advent in technology, medical advancement agricultural breakthrough, people living in modern day world are in far better circumctances than their grandparents. Obviously, there are better education opportunites for children, enhanced employment options for adults and improved health care for olders. Technology is the that strong power which has revolutionized the structure of whole globe. Vividly, in such circumstances it is hardly to even imagine that how could be the life without these luxuries.Not the mention, this advancement journey is still going on. For the way of illustration, I am a house wife who canot carry out her housechores from cleaning to cooking to everything, withoutout assistance of technology.my children are getting online education from an Oxford school, Moreover,my husband is workiung for an international engineering firm. If I had lived in past, I wouldnt have cherished all these facilities.
The second notion came to my mind to elucidate my standpoint is associated with the issue that my in the past lives was hectic, individuals had to spent hours of their day to their farms growing crops and working like anything. It goes without saying that everything i mentioned in the abobe pargagrph would be reversed if i just think anout living in past. Lets just talk about medical condition, people had not proper health facilities and many were died of the ailments whose trement could be just immunization and vaccination today. My grandfather case is a compelling example of this. About seventy years ago, he passed because of prostrate cancer at very young age. On the other hand, my dad had same kind of cancer later in his 5oz he got cured after chemotherpies and all the medical treatment. It is clear to see why living at a ag
By perusing above pargaraphs, One can infer that living today is extremely comfortable and enjoyable. For the sake of brevity, few points are worth reiterating. First, living in a modern world provides people with myriad of advantages. Second, living at my grandparent's era accompained with ardous life thast is full of strenous work anf hardships. As for this writer's opinion. I vehemently urge people to get benefit from contemporary lifestyle anf stop living in the past. since benefits of living in today's worlds outweights the disadvantages of past life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...uality of life, others contemplate that todays life is most comfotable because of the ...
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Suggestion: Not
...ould be the life without these luxuries.Not the mention, this advancement journey i...
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...ducation from an Oxford school, Moreover,my husband is workiung for an internationa...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...tional engineering firm. If I had lived in past, I wouldnt have cherished all these fac...
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...neering firm. If I had lived in past, I wouldnt have cherished all these facilities. T...
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...e reversed if i just think anout living in past. Lets just talk about medical condition...
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...tment. It is clear to see why living at a ag By perusing above pargaraphs, One c...
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...is full of strenous work anf hardships. As for this writers opinion. I vehemently ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
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...trenous work anf hardships. As for this writers opinion. I vehemently urge people to ge...
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... lifestyle anf stop living in the past. since benefits of living in todays worlds out...
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Message: “since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... lifestyle anf stop living in the past. since benefits of living in todays worlds out...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, still, as for, kind of, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2549.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13911290323 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01240646484 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 212.727598566 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 801.9 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1865016702 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.96 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.84 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130155326316 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313822381869 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375986361638 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764910539373 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236232682159 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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