Many filmmakers made movie based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch movie first. What do you think?
Films play a vital role in our lives. they are the main way for our entertainments. Some people believe that it is better to read books before watching the movies based on them, Others, prefer to watch movie first. Personally, I agree with second opinion which prefer watching movie first for several reasons which I will explore them in my essay.
To begin with, It is more exciting to see a movie without knowing any ideas about what will happen. Moreover, You will pay more attention to catch up every single scene in the movie. However, If you read the book, You could lose some of your desire to know the details of the movie as you know the end of the story. I remember when I bough Titanic story for my daughter last year. She was very excited about reading this story as I kept telling her that it was my favorite movie. She spent four hours in a row to finish it. A week latter, I found that Titanic movie is available in the movie theater by our house. We decided to have a movie night in the week end. In this day I was so excited as I though that my daughter will be surprised by the movie. I shocked when I found her playing on her phone without paying any attention to the movie. When I asked her about the reason, She told me that she knows already what will happen previously from the book and she feels that she is bored.
Secondly, If you watched the movie first, You would be in the characters' shoes. You would feel the same feeling in each scene as if you live the story. In other hand, If you read the book, You already have an idea about each character. Therefore, You would not enjoy sharing their feeling in the movie to that extend.
Last but not least, Watching a movie first could help you saving time if you have a time frame for your entertainment. If you started reading the book related to the movie, You could not have enough time to complete it. Therefore, you would be stuck between a rock and a hard place. You would either reread the book again to remember the story which means waste of time or ignore this story for this moment in case you do not have enough time to finish the book. Unfortunately, both choices could affect your impression about this story negatively.
In sum, There are many ways to enjoy watching a movie. Either by reading its story first in a book or watching it before reading its related story book. Each method has its advantages and disadvantages. You are the only person who can choose the best way to enjoy your watching ti maximum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37687366167 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21305355182 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464668094218 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1508611025 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6785714286 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326838189216 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907353237034 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106806316502 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197700727214 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073667158169 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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