In modern times, children learn more from their parent. Others believe parents learn more from their children.
With the progress of techology and technological advance, the condition of life has changed dramatically. Children have accustomed to these new technologies better rather than their parents. Therefore, some people belive that children have a lot of information about different issues and they can help their parents. I, on the other hand, think that children learn more from their parents in today’s world. I feel this way for two main reasos, which I will elaborate in the following essay.
First of all, parents have more experiences in the life because they have came into different situations during their life. In contrast, children have not experienced a lot of different conditions since they have not lived independently. Most of the data that children gain from the internet or other sources are not reliable and majority of them are theoritical. Consequently, children cannot use these information in their life and they have to consult with their parents who have more experience, and gain data. For example, when I was at university, I had a lot of problems to make a long-term plan for every semester. I thought that I could learn how to make a plan for studying with surfing on the internet, but I was not successful because I could not find a practical solution. Then, I decided to speak with my father about my situation. it is worth mentioning that my father is a professor of one of the high-ranked universities in my country. Hencforce, he could help me to make a effective plan, and I could get great scores in the university.
Secondly, children gain most of their data from the internet and social media, and most of these information are not reliable. As a matter of fact, if children make their decisions based on these information, they will not become successful in the future since most of them are not accurate. Most of the websites that share these data want to earn money through advertising different products, and they do not care about the accuracy of their information. As far as I am concerned, if children want to learn their parents a lesson that they have taught on the internet, most of their parents will not become satisfied with their words, and they will epitomize conditions for them to show that their lesson is not correct.
By way of conclusion, I strongly believe that children can be taught more from their parents in the modern day of technology. This is because not only have their parents more experiences that they have learned from living in the tough conditions but also most of the advices that children have are from the social media and they are not reliable source of data.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...periences in the life because they have came into different situations during their ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...ical. Consequently, children cannot use these information in their life and they have to consult ...
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Suggestion: It
...peak with my father about my situation. it is worth mentioning that my father is a...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ry. Hencforce, he could help me to make a effective plan, and I could get great s...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... internet and social media, and most of these information are not reliable. As a matter of fact, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... children make their decisions based on these information, they will not become successful in the...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... most of the advices that children have are from the social media and they are not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, i feel, in contrast, as a matter of fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84734513274 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75306857894 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435840707965 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2544039441 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.55 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412060778503 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13999529448 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154410809411 0.0737576698707 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319379743285 0.150856017488 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100779602319 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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