Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With this galloping rate in which science and technology are flourishing, the standards of life have changed exceedingly over the past few decades. Some people, however, hold the opinion that individuals have more concern in today's world in comparison to the past. When it comes to this point, people have some debates as to whether life is more comfortable in these days because of the development of technology or it was easier in the past. Personally speaking, I believe that living in today's world in more comfortable for individuals. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will elaborate in the following essay.
First of all, people can enjoy travel all over the world during their vacation, which was impossible for people who lived at that time. As far as I am concerned, if people can find an opportunity to travel all over the world, this trip would help them to relieve their stress and to deal with what they have on their plate. Going on a trip was more difficult at that time because there was not a lot of progress in technology. In contrast, nowadays, people can travel in the farthest part of the world in the blink of an eye.
Secondly, there are a lot of hospitals and health services in the remotest part of the world these days, which individuals could find just in the biggest cities of the country several decades ago. Therefore, these services have helped that people deal with various diseases so much easier, which leads them to have a not only healthier but also more comfortable life. For instance, while in the new world, once in a blue moon people lose their children because of the lack of advanced level of hygiene, my mother told me that she has lost five of his siblings when they were under the age of five. As a consequence, the condition of life is so much better for the new generation in comparison to the condition of life for their grandparents because the advanced level of hygiene that helps people to live longer in comparison to the past.
Last but not the least, children can do a lot of activities, like playing video games, watching movies, and going to the amusement park, to name but a few which were a distant dream several decades ago that their grandparents used to live. As a matter of fact, with this rate of development of technology and the advent of new instruments, life is so much easier for the new generation.
By way of conclusion, the analysis of the aforementioned ideas brings us to the point that life was more severe at the time that our grandparents were children. This is because people can travel so much more comfortable in today's world, the number of hospitals has been increased in recent years, and the invention of new devices for children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...to this point, people have some debates as to whether life is more comfortable in these days ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in contrast, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 484.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64462809917 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60703196534 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456611570248 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7599160353 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.235294118 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4705882353 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174427986515 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669594823969 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488226585211 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116757066098 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489707261278 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.