Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the progress of technology and the advent of new instruments, the condition of life has changed dramatically. An individual should be aware about the decisions that he makes since it will cost him a lot to make a bad decision. As far as I am concerned, a person has to make a long term plan for his plan with consulting by experienced people. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will elaborate in the following essay.
First of all, people have to consider different points of view when they want to make a decision because every decision has different impacts in today's modern world. They have to think about their decisions and speak with other people about their choices. Therefore, they have to spend a lot of time to make a long term plan for their life since their decisions have to be considered in different views. An individual can not understand every details about their choices without planing fot that. For example, several years ago I decided to apply abroad to continue my education. I wanted to attend a high-ranked university in the world. It was very crucial for me, anf after several months of researching I undesood that if I want to reach my dream, I had to make a plan to write several papers and learn English in those years. Consequently, with making this plan I could attend one of the best universities in Canada.
Secondly, the economic condition in most parts of the world is not very proper. As a matter of fact, most of the countries have a lot of financial problems and their people are experiencing bad life conditions. It is worth mentioning that the price of the most of products in my country has doubled in recent years. So, people have to be aware about their financial matters and make a plan for their future in this world. If they make a bad decision about their properties or they advocate their money to establish a non-effective comapany, the chance of losing all of their money is very high in comparison to the past. My aunt's life is a compelling example of this. Several months ago my aunt decided to change her house, thereby she sold her house. The price of the house increased exceedingly in that time that she could not buy a better house with her money, and she bought a smaller house eventually.
In conclusion, I stronly believe that it is very critical for every individual to make a plan for his future. This is because not only do they should consider all of the aspects and angles of their decisions but also the economic condition is not reliable in the today's world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: MAKE_SINCE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sense'?
Suggestion: sense
...aware about the decisions that he makes since it will cost him a lot to make a bad de...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the products') or simply say ''most products''.
Suggestion: most of the products; most products
... worth mentioning that the price of the most of products in my country has doubled in recent yea...
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Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ecause not only do they should consider all of the aspects and angles of their decisions b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5886214442 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61524127033 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459518599562 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9995867747 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3181818182 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7727272727 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159154793064 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528455870489 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391238830698 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109784486951 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152262010828 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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