The more money people have the more money they should give away to charity

Essay topics:

The more money people have, the more money they should give away to charity

Currently, society has witnessed an unprecedented accumulation of material affluence, therefore the gap between the rich and the poor is continuously widening, which exacerbates the quarrel over polarization between the rich and the poor. Meanwhile, varieties of suggestions are also put forward which are initiated to bridge the gap. Personally speaking, I reckon that those wealthy people are supposed to donate their money to charities and my view can be substantiated as follows.
To start with, the endowment made by the wealthy are the most direct and efficient approaches to support those families living in extreme poverty. To be more specific, a bunch of individuals living in developing countries do not have sufficient potable water to drink, some of them even need to feed on barks, leaves or food that is not processed for hygiene, which induces varieties of epidemic diseases, such as malaria, and also poses a threat of the well being of the whole globalized world. Direct money allocation to those regions can exert efficient effects on grapple with their thirst for subsistence and make improvements in their living conditions to a large extent. Additionally, it is obvious that if the wealthy do not make endowments to charities seeking for the improved living conditions, they will also be confronted with popping and intractable problems, even a problematic world saturated with diseases that beyond people’s control or cannot be cured with regular medication intervention.
What’s more, the rich are doom to assume the responsibility to make a donation to charities since the widening gap will also inflame the extremely deprived individuals’ resentment toward them. Bluntly speaking, a bunch of deprived individuals, no matter how their abject poverty is resulted in, they harbor resentment and hatred toward individuals that are richer and wealthier than them. Motivated or inflamed by their jealousy, they are likely to commit some crimes, for instance, robbery, sexual harassment, rapes, gun shooting, or even massacre, which absolutely gives rise to social uncertainties and endangers the lives of wealthy and reputed persons. That is to say, in other words, making a donation is an approach for the rich to not only safeguard social stability but also ensure their own safety. It is investigated by a world renown news magazines that the more deprived a region is, the higher the crime rate it has. In addition, the majority of crimes are committed geared toward rich men. On the contrary, if any endowment is made to improve residents’ living conditions, the crime rates drop drastically. This investigation illuminates that making endowment is a terrific method to safeguard social security and enable the wealthy to stay away from threats geared toward their lives.
Admittedly, the liabilities of eliminating poverty shall not merely be borne by the rich, other entity, for instance, the authorities, the international organizations, are also legally responsible to make concerted efforts to liberate deprived individuals from the constraints of poor living conditions, like enacting policies, passing legislation and negotiate with other countries to seek help. Nevertheless, all firm measures cannot be enacted with sufficient funds, which can only be derived from the wealthy, who obtain an agglomeration of material affluence.
In a nutshell, the richer people are, the more they have to give away to charities aiming at eliminating poverty since money is the most efficient way to tackle the problem and donations that are made also benefit the rich to stay away from the threats and unsafety.

Votes
Average: 9.5 (2 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2022-08-15 mrhj75 75 view
2022-08-09 abusrddddd 73 view
2022-08-09 abusrddddd 73 view
2022-06-19 Rustin_Panda 70 view
2021-08-05 reeya kiran 70 view
Essay Categories
Essays by user zheng__zy :

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i reckon, in addition, such as, in other words, on the contrary, to start with, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3083.0 1977.66487455 156% => OK
No of words: 571.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39929947461 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03719972745 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520140105079 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 981.0 618.680645161 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 12.0 3.08781362007 389% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7637119532 48.9658058833 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.277777778 100.406767564 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7222222222 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1762150608 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546151521345 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873003827892 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127383372363 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12761641351 0.0645574589148 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 11.7677419355 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 58.1214874552 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 174.0 86.8835125448 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Write the essay in 30 minutes.

Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.