The most important investment for a company is to spend money to improve the works skill of employees.
Since the dawn of civilization, job has had one of the most greatest roles in people's live from all over the world, for it has one of the most prominent influence changes on their lives. Although some people believe that companies should not invest in enhancing level of their employees, I firmly concur with the idea that companies should improve their worker's skill. There are some reasons, the most important of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, it is undoubted that so influential has knowledge of worker been that it has had a great number of positive effects on their lives all around the world, yet above all it has helped companies to increase their level and brings more projects for companies by having advanced and adept workers. To illustrate this fact, one needs only refer to numerous companies miss their reputation by lack of having update workers to nowadays information. Take a personal experience as an example, there was a time that I worked for a company’s due to progression technology workers should learnt about computer skill to stay in competition situation of market. The boss had decided to hold a workshop for its workers to learn computer better resulting in were able to do our project better and bring more money for our company by our great performance. I strongly believe that had our boss not held that workshop, we would not have improved our skill to become successful.
Furthermore, it is established beyond doubt that on the one hand some people believe that company should invest in other aspects of work conditions such as changing old equipment or give more money to increase their motivation, yet on the another hand some people believe that if one company increases their workers skills, they are able to expand their business which bring them and workers several lucrative consequences such job promotion and more salaries. For this reason, I do believe that the more company have more advanced and knowledgeable workers, the more they can start doing bigger projects. To demonstrate, there is a great consensus among scientist all around the world that worker’s skill directly have effect on companies’ profits. So they established an experimental program worldwide to estimate of effectiveness of this matter on their progression. The result are surprising, approximately 90% of prosperous businessmen allow their workers to attend the university to get higher degree and enhance their knowledge.
To make a long story short, by considering all aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that no one can deny the enormous positive effects of having skillful workers on future of companies. Not only are they able to expand their business, but also worker and bosses can get more money by having lasting job. For this reason, I highly recommend that bosses improve their workers level to bring themselves more profits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'greatest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: greatest
...of civilization, job has had one of the most greatest roles in peoples live from all over the...
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Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the greatest'.
Suggestion: most the greatest
...of civilization, job has had one of the most greatest roles in peoples live from all over the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11530398323 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80025791443 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498951781971 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4179749465 48.9658058833 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8125 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228177510527 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790354817671 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524327596158 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15606576458 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681283476473 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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