Movies and books can reflect the ideas and the spirit of a particular period. What have you learned about a place or its peo- ple from watching films or reading books? Use specific examples and details to support your response.
Movies have been there for hundreds of years in many countires. North America is the pioneer in in the film industry which is followed by European countries. However, in today's world, movies are very common and almost every country have its own film productions in many different langugaes.I believe that we can learn about various places and its people simply by watching movies. I will elaborate more in the following passages.
Firstly, we can learn a lot about the culture and the society by merely watching the characters that actors play in movies. We can notice the way actors communicate with their elderly and friends. For example, when I was in my sophomore year in college, korean movies were in trend, so, my frinds and I, would watch korean movies all day,thus we leanrned almost everything about their culture even though we have never been to Korea. We knew that they are highly respectable to their parents and elderly. Also, about their traditional dress and their weddings and rituals.
Secondly, watching the movies allow us to notice the places and environments. Movies are shot at different locations, and simply watching movies, we get to know about the various places. For instance, I live in nothern India, but I have never been to south India, thus I still know how the places are in south India because of watching many south indian movies. India, is a huge country therefore, many diversity of the country is quite popular thus, staying in Northern India is totally different feeling than living in Northern Inida, but just because of places, but laos due to difference in culture and looks of pople.
Finally, we can learn about the food of different country without visiting the place. Noodles and Momo are quite famous chinese dishes however, such dishes are prevent everywhere thats is because of videos and the movies we watch. Likewise, Indian dishes are also very famous in other countries. Therefore, watching movies can also tells us about the dishes.
I believe that movies are great way to reflect the essence of different places.We can learn about other countries's cultures and societies, and foods and also different places. AS a result, movies plays important role in our lives in tecahing us various countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01326259947 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44870545788 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496021220159 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9196604472 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4736842105 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181147234557 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641651394156 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538211208472 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114944798043 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346942808686 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.