"Movies and Television strongly infleunce the way people behave" use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
Movies and television have become a part of the daily schedule. The exposure to them has increased multiple times and thus the influence it has on people has also increased. Like a coin has two sides, the influence due to these mediums can also be categorised into some good and bad points.
Some channels and movies that are telecast are intellectually of a good standard, which have a positive impact on people’s minds. Especially the young minds, since they are yet to ripen and can mould in a particular manner.
For example, some movies about inspiring legends that have occurred in history, their biographies and stories help in learning a lot about how great minds worked, with good take away lessons.
Movies and television can also change and affect a person’s point of view about a certain topic or an individual. The news broadcast gives insights about the political scenario and thus proves to be a decision maker in voting and electing the next leader.
The news shown can be tweaked and made incorrect; therefore the decisions made can be wrong. Hence, a negative influence is possible.
Kids these days are constantly glued to the television set, with their parents usually not around to monitor what they are watching. Sometimes due to the lack of supervision, kids end up watching stuff which is not suitable for their age. This can lead to serious trauma and affect their growth.
The violence and crime rate is increasing on a daily basis, which can tend to mould their brains either in favour of it or can cause permanent damage.
None the less, under proper supervision, kids can learn and develop new ideas through movies and tv shows about space, animals and great leaders which can be motivational and educational.
It could prove to be an alternative method of education instead of only studying through books, since visual aids are far more engaging and interesting. The rate of absorption of information is escalated when it is made fun.
With the birth of many creative minds and globalisation, there is a confluence of ideas which are breaking the standardised ways of thinking.
To conclude, Movies and television shows of various parts of the world are available at the finger tips, creating a vast network of ideas. The effect of those can be positive as well as negative, it is how the person perceives it and uses it to his/her benefit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Nonetheless
...of it or can cause permanent damage. None the less, under proper supervision, kids can lea...
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Line 15, column 154, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
... a vast network of ideas. The effect of those can be positive as well as negative, it is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92839506173 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69631890734 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550617283951 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3121800464 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0724969482302 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241494782784 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295063956922 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0293912870559 0.150856017488 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236853284283 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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