Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
With the advent of technologies, people have multiple ways for entertainment. Among so many ways to obtain pleasure, movies are always considered a popular choice. Let me elaborate some details in the following essay.
First, the special effects and astounding sound effects spice up movie itself. In the post production of a film, special effects are added to create a more splendid world while sounds effects and background music bring audience into the emotion. A well-designed movie effects and inspiring music guarantee a film to be enjoyable. For example, Star War is one of the most prevailing movie franchise. When Darth Vader faced his enemy, the heavy, mechanic breath, along with his shiny glare on his sword as well as his iconic deep voice. These impressive features from him are marvelous and suddenly catch audience's attention every time he shows up. In this movie, aside from the detailed depiction of figures, special effects on high-tech machines such as futuristic gun that shoots laser or the recreation of the vast universe, and last but not the least: the ascending texts appearing in the first of every episode. Thanks to special effect and sound effect, these features allow Star War to be a most popular movie franchise.
Second, the fantasy worlds introduced with movies are intriguing. Certain movies genre are based on imagination, that is, the plots are bascially unrealistic. For example, a talking dog that can articulate its idea. Imagine that, one day your dog starts talking to you and even help with your homework instead of tearing it apart? That's insane. Because movies can achieve what cannot be real and showcase how the world is going to react to such impossible scenario. Thus, movies become popular among people.
To sum up, movies are popular all over the world. For one thing, it provides unforgettable and astounding visual and sound effects which allow people to indulge them into a fantastic world, and for another, movies make things impossible possible in plots; therefore people become interested in so they desire to find out the what if certain situations happened in real life. In a nutshell, as mentioned in this essay, movies are popular all over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: movies'; movie's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, for one thing, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08767123288 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58176116463 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594520547945 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1864786264 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.85 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262906052409 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095463916922 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114320497528 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174253208181 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792434200302 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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