In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young
Today’s younger generation has all the necessary commodities that our parents did not have. Nevertheless, I do not believe that millenniums have a better life than their parents. I will explain in the following essay.
First, sixty years ago life was much slower. Our parents and grandparents lived more relax and down to earth life. they did not worry about technology or travel, the only thing that concerned them was to put food on their families’ plates. Furthermore, they used to work from early morning till dusk, when night time came, it was time to relax with their families and have a quiet family dinner. All in all, I believe, this kind of quiet life is a much better one than today’s younger generation running up and down, getting in debt before they even start a job, like is happening with today’s college students.
Second, people live and die in their own town. Sixty years ago, people did not dream of living somewhere else. The whole world was their own town or city. In addition, people that study and become professionals, they usually return to their town to help the community. On the contrary, millenniums, their sole ambition is to live in cosmopolitan cities and strive to become millionaires before their 30 birthday, like I read last week, in an article regarding young people in Hong Kong. This kind of hassles creates stress and poor health, eventually deteriorating the quality of life of the person.
Lastly, our parents and grandparents die of old age. Nowadays, people suffer from all kinds of diseases related to stress and anxiety. No wonder, their lives have become a line of events that they need to accomplish by certain times and certain places, otherwise, there are considered failures. Constantly, their lives are judged through social media. The rate of suicide has increased, the used of liberated stress drugs like heroin and morphine has shot up exponentially. On the contrary, our parents and grandparents did not suffer from this type of event to me their quality of life was much better than it is today with young people.
By way of conclusion, I believe that today’s millenniums live a depressing kind of life. Our parents and grandparents used to have a much better quality of lif
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, lastly, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, as to, in addition, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96315789474 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74639527028 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523684210526 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3860104869 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7272727273 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325851587782 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886439045465 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638140045237 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193200206447 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257055292225 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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