"Never, never give up"-Agree or dis agree.
It is sometimes not possible to achieve goal in one try and particularly for a tough tergate. I believe that one can complete a task if he tries and ingrain the attitude - never, never leave. However, there are many controversies whether it is good or bad. I personally believe that the above mention statement is beneficial to us for two reasons, i explain bellow.
First and foremost, for doing a great job, one needs big mentality to do diligent job to reach his targate. Like the same way, a person imbibes the proverb- Never, never give up and prepare his the motivation to do hard work. I personally have great experience about this. During my graduation, I was very weak in english, but it was necessary to be prefecient at english language to continue my degree program. Therefore, I started hard work and took two tution classes to improve my defeciency. I did that in a quarter of month. So, I believe that never give up a task untill one get success.
Secondly, it is compulsary to do hard work and try again and again to achieve success. Without adequate effort, it is impossible to get success. everyone knows that practice makes a man perfect and when one practices again and again that increases the possibility of getting success. For instance, the great players are not innet skillful but they tried a lot and practied diligently day and night for long time. Even in military service the soldiers practice always and continue their hard work till their retirement. It is clear that reaching to the success in not easy and require lots of effort.
Finally, the mantra 'Never, never give up' galvanizes a person to strive for success. That helps to build the mentality and urges for hard works for completing a goal.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the mantra is very useful to prepare ones mentality and help to get success. This is because it helps to galvanize one's attitude and mentality to do labourious work for getting success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77419354839 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64396047621 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527859237537 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0365003428 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5238095238 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2380952381 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126135684565 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044985982166 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948902135548 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854288493508 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767249054645 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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