Now more than ever, people are aware of the importance of good health. Unfortunately, many have poor
lifestyle habits that are difficult to break. It is crucial for people to adopt better physical and dietary
routines if they expect to improve their health. Which of the following do you think is the best way to
stay in good health?
- Participating in group sports
- Learning how to cook healthy meals
- Joining a gym and following a strict exercise routine
Even though nowadays many humans have a great awareness on well-being, some still maintain an unhealthy way of living. As it is quite essential for people to create an advanced physical condition and nutrition style, I believe that with participating in group sports they can maintain a balanced lifestyle in terms of good health. This is because, the group activities provide participants with a human interaction and help them to stay connected with the nature. I will explain my reasons throughout this essay.
In these modern times, many people are lacking a solid human communication since a great number of them are usually busy with their Daily life struggles. Participating a group sport is not only help individuals to stay active but also give them the much needed peer interaction. The reason for that is as participating a group game means individuals need to build a strong communication with their teammates in order to make a cohesive group dialog for achieving good accomplishments. For instance, last year I involved in a local basketball team to gain a weight, in the end of the sports term I did not only build a stronger body but also earnt a good friend with whom I met during the team preparation fort he upcoming season.
Additionally, as an outcome of the modern city living, people has lost their contact with the green lands. Group sport activities can help people to re-connect with the nature. This is because, many of the group activities taking place at outdoors. Therefore, participants may work on maintaning a healthy lifestyle where they can also having benefits of being in nature and providing their lungs with a fresh air. Hiking is a great example regards this, since the activity is about climbing mountains with a group of people, this sport gives individuals all the above-mentioned benefits.
To conclude, although awareness on living healthy is currenty increasing, some people still have habits that are not fit in a healthy lifestyle. However, this can be preventable if the individuals take a place in group sports. Because this way of doing sport is provide them with human interaction while giving a chance them to connect with the nature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...a healthy lifestyle where they can also having benefits of being in nature and providi...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...dividuals take a place in group sports. Because this way of doing sport is provide them...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...rts. Because this way of doing sport is provide them with human interaction while givin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02465753425 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88355350925 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528767123288 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3841839289 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.625 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133480727775 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499927404712 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517205109894 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924511413623 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254096144657 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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