Nowadays many high schools and universities require students to work on projects in groups, and all members of the group receive the same grade (mark) on the project. Do you agree or disagree that giving every member of a group the same grade is a good way to evaluate students?
In recent era, a lot of student want to be more specillized in order to get proper job nd acquire high income. One of the best way to learn knowledge and experience is education in university. Taking adjusted and optional course can develop knowledge about differnet studnet. Recently, almost of faculty assign one or some assignmet or project in order to catch and reinforce the knowledge of hteir student in the class. I definitely agree with this statement that studnet need to work in group for doing collaborative project. I feel this way for tripel reason that will elaborate following paragraph.
I the begining, this idea will be in incentive for student to do assigned roles and be responsible. in the word, the students forced to projects that maybe is requir for their professional career in future. Sometimes, stuendts postphone their ssignmet to last minute and being lazy for oing that. while in group project, the lazy one push to forward by another to doing some apart of project. As I remember when I was a undergrdute student, For a presention that me and my clssmate assigned for prepare and represent in the class. I think, it give me a sense of responsiblity and commitment for doing my task becaue presece of my friend.
Moreover, Doing a addignmett or project gives the studnet a lot knowledge and experience and broaden their horizon. Everone should learn group working because at recent decads we definitel well-known that group working is basic role of every successful company to lead their direction to goal. To put it another way, everyone have a specific expreience and insight when we gather these differnt idea, expreience to a pool, it will caused to make a comprehensive results. for example, some of presigious company such as apple, IBM nd so on have collection of manger, consulator, advisor to ge a decisive decision.
in conclude, for all of resean discussed I am strongly believing that group working for a project cn develop studnet regrding pragmatical expreience, responsibility, knowledge and so on. All of the consequence may be useful and prepeare them for their career and personal living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of students'.
Suggestion: a lot of students
In recent era, a lot of student want to be more specillized in order to...
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...e assignmet or project in order to catch and reinforce the knowledge of hteir stu...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at will elaborate following paragraph. I the begining, this idea will be in ince...
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Suggestion: In
...o do assigned roles and be responsible. in the word, the students forced to projec...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'project'.
Suggestion: project
...le. in the word, the students forced to projects that maybe is requir for their professi...
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Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...is requir for their professional career in future. Sometimes, stuendts postphone their ss...
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Suggestion: While
...st minute and being lazy for oing that. while in group project, the lazy one push to ...
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Message: Wrong collocation. Did you mean 'apart from'?
Suggestion: apart from
...ush to forward by another to doing some apart of project. As I remember when I was a und...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rt of project. As I remember when I was a undergrdute student, For a presention t...
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Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...and represent in the class. I think, it give me a sense of responsiblity and commitm...
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... my task becaue presece of my friend. Moreover, Doing a addignmett or project ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...esece of my friend. Moreover, Doing a addignmett or project gives the studnet...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to group'
Suggestion: to group
...den their horizon. Everone should learn group working because at recent decads we def...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...rnt idea, expreience to a pool, it will caused to make a comprehensive results. for ex...
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...caused to make a comprehensive results. for example, some of presigious company suc...
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...r, advisor to ge a decisive decision. in conclude, for all of resean discussed I...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...conclude, for all of resean discussed I am strongly believing that group working for a project cn dev...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...e, responsibility, knowledge and so on. All of the consequence may be useful and prepeare ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, i feel, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97765363128 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8780873702 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564245810056 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8282243908 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198416458265 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654596682797 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649288749542 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126459743015 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116552348087 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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