A university recognized first year students have poor study skills in its university Some in the university believe the best way to address this is to ask all first year students have to pass course on study skills Others don t agree with this requirement | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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A university recognized first-year students have poor
study skills in its university. Some in the university believe the best way to address this is to ask all first year students have to pass course on study skills. Others don't agree with this requirement. What is your opinion?

One of the most controversial subjects in the education sector is learning how to learning studying skills in-depth. Learning strategies and methods are very important for students for every level of education, particularly for higher education in university. Some education administrators believe that students should learn learning methods by self-motivation without any mandatory course in the first year of college. On the other hand, others believe that it is crucial to learn learning methods through assigned courses by obligation in the first year of study in university. From my perspective, I firmly agree with the latter opinion since of two main reasons, and I will elaborate my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
The most noteworthy point to mention regarding the learning subjects by mandatory course is that most students did not have enough self-motivation to learn study skills independently. In other words, some of them do not access sufficiently studying skills, or some of the students maybe they were believed that they have enough knowledge regarding this subject but not sufficient or, even worse, ineffective at the wrong direction. Therefore, the university directors should address this problem by introducing studying courses for the freshman by mandatory requirements to fulfill needs. To put in a more vivid picture, this course will lead the students to studying skills and materials during their education by hearts and efficient time which will prosper their education in student's career in the future.
The second reason worth pointing out is that higher education and university education may be not familar for some of the students and can not adapt themself learning subjects and enable handling them. Moreover, most courses in the student's chart are very overwhelming to handle without enough and modern knowledge regarding studying skills. As a result, It is better to meet and train through experienced tutors to learn appropriate skills to overcome heavy assignments and study courses. My example is compelling evidence to justify my standpoint. As a freshman student in college, I have encountered a bunch of learning materials such as different books for a course, massive notes in class, projects, and reports that I have not been prepared and trained during my college for such huge tasks to overcome. Therefore, my grades have fallen, and I could not compensate in any way during my education. Had I trained to study skills at the beginning of my education in university, I would be successful more than now in my education.
To draw a comprehensive conclusion, I strongly believe that learning materials by mandatory course would help students be well-prepared during education, particularly for un self-interested students to learn study skills in an effective and prosperous direction.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to study'.
Suggestion: to study
...tion sector is learning how to learning studying skills indepth Learning strategies and ...
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Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to learn'.
Suggestion: to learn
...tors believe that students should learn learning methods by selfmotivation without any m...
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Line 1, column 476, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to learn'.
Suggestion: to learn
...ers believe that it is crucial to learn learning methods through assigned courses by obl...
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Line 1, column 719, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my viewpoint in the following paragraphs The most noteworthy point to mention reg...
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Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to study'
Suggestion: to study
...not have enough selfmotivation to learn study skills independently In other words so...
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Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion to learn study skills independently In other words some of them do not acces...
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Line 2, column 800, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ucation in students career in the future The second reason worth pointing out is ...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ersity education may be not familar for some of the students and can not adapt themself lea...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
...ain through experienced tutors to learn appropriate skills to overcome heavy assignments an...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'note'?
Suggestion: note
...as different books for a course massive notes in class projects and reports that I ha...
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Line 3, column 1018, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...successful more than now in my education To draw a comprehensive conclusion I str...
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Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to study'
Suggestion: to study
...for un selfinterested students to learn study skills in an effective and prosperous d...
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Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in an effective and prosperous direction
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2360.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31531531532 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93776932326 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45045045045 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 444.0 20.1344086022 2205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2360.0 100.406767564 2350% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 444.0 20.6045352989 2155% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 126.0 5.45110844103 2311% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336379398794 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.336379398794 0.076458572812 440% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222419218183 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070869125691 0.0645574589148 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 225.6 11.7677419355 1917% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -387.64 58.1214874552 -667% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 177.6 10.1575268817 1748% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.06 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 28.93 8.01818996416 361% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 10.002688172 630% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 179.6 10.0537634409 1786% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 10.247311828 615% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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