One could learn a lot about a person from the type of friends the person has

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One could learn a lot about a person from the type of friends the person has.

Friends always play crucial role in one's life. We can affect our friends easily and we are also influenced by our friends sometimes. People possess different opinions on whether one could learn about a person from the type of friends the person has. As far as I'm concerned, I totally agree with the idea for the following reasons.

To start with, people tend to make friends with those who have the same taste, same personality and same value so we can learn about a person by knowing his friends. To clarify this point, a study from Harvard University shows that optimistic people are prone to make friends with optimistic ones because the communication between people who have the same personality is much easier than those who are different. As a result, we can easily tell who a person is by knowing his friends.

In addition, friends will become more alike so we can easily distinguish a person from the types of the person has. That is to say, the longer those friendships maintain, the similar those people will be. For example, my senior high school friend, Amy, and I were totally different kinds of person. She was outgoing and optimistic while I was quiet and sensitive. After we became the best friend, we start to influence each other in many aspects. I started to laugh more often and she became less noisy and many of our friends all regarded us as twin having the same temper. As a result, we can precisely learn about a person by observing his friends.

Last but not least, people always try to fit in their friends so we can tell a person by seeing his friends. To further elaborate, sometimes we might try to change our taste to become a better fit with our friends even if we have different opinions. Take my brother as an example. He started to smoke at university because his college friends were all smoke and. He started to smoke from them and he ever told me he hated smoking at beginning but now he got used to it already. Consequently, by accquienting friends, we can know one's characters quickly.

For these aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that one can learn about a person by knowing what types of friends the person has, that's because people prefer to make friends with those have the same thoughts, people will become more alike and people always want to adapt in their friend zone.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, while, for example, in addition, as a result, to start with, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67718446602 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45229126413 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468446601942 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1661430217 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7619047619 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.619047619 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374225371858 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127977405346 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159887286474 0.0737576698707 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268539694937 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111356067492 0.0645574589148 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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