Parents are the best teachers.
since the dawn of civilization, parents have been playing the crucial part in their children's lives. however, there has been a long standing discussion whether parents are the best teachers for the children or not. The advocates hold the view that parents play the biggest role in their children's behavior, while, the opponents have the opposite viewpoint. personally, I believe that parents are the best teachers. In the following essay I will elaborate my standpoint using two reasonable pieces of evidence.
since the dawn of civilization, parents have been playing the crucial part in their children's lives. however, there has been a long standing discussion whether parents are the best teachers for the children or not. The advocates hold the view that parents play the biggest role in their children's behavior, while, the opponents have the opposite viewpoint. personally, I believe that parents are the best teachers. In the following essay I will elaborate my standpoint using two reasonable pieces of evidence. since the dawn of civilization, parents have been playing the crucial part in their children's lives. however, there has been a long standing discussion whether parents are the best teachers for the children or not. The advocates hold the view that parents play the biggest role in their children's behavior, while, the opponents have the opposite viewpoint. personally, I believe that parents are the best teachers. In the following essay I will elaborate my standpoint using two reasonable pieces of evidence. since the dawn of civilization, parents have been playing the crucial part in their children's lives. however, there has been a long standing discussion whether parents are the best teachers for the children or not. The advocates hold the view that parents play the biggest role in their children's behavior, while, the opponents have the opposite viewpoint. personally, I believe that parents are the best teachers. In the following essay I will elaborate my standpoint using two reasonable pieces of evidence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31481481481 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75073253743 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 57.0 212.727598566 27% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.175925925926 0.524837075471 34% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3130005675 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 5.45110844103 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337408456874 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210054925274 0.076458572812 275% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.233747593492 0.0737576698707 317% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337408456874 0.150856017488 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 3.92523114671e-17 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.75 8.01818996416 72% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 86.8835125448 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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