Parents are best Teachers
I grew up surrounded by love and care. My parents have given me all what I needed, especially education. I agree with the statement that mom and dad are best teachers. I will explore those reasons in the following essay.
To begin with, all what parent teach us they do from the bottom of their heart. Nobody on the Earth would not care about us as they do. For example, I met a truly claver professor in university, although getting knowledge from him seems unreal. He was nonchalant and careless about students. Later, I gave up my attempts to communicate with him and skipped his classes. The case above is not news and illustrates that normally great lessons are taught not through a wits, but through a heart.
The second idea in the favor of the first is that my parents are always near by me, even if we are living on different continents. I mean mental contact. My mom knows all about me, that is why her lessons are best in certain cases. Nobody could not feel me as deep as she does. For instance, I was absolutely confused and could not find the theme of my university graduation work. My tutor gives a lot of suggestions and all of her topics let me down. My mom took me to Kaliningrad with her and together we elaborated the significantly interesting idea. I defended my work with confidence, got excellent mark and all of this thanks to my mom. She assists me every time I need her attention. She is the best teacher in no matter about what tasks are.
To sum it up, my parents follow me and support me during whole my life. Their contribution in my education is immeasurable. Mom and dad are definitely the best teachers for me, because they are interested in me, teach me, love me as nobody does.
- young people have a better life today then their parents enjoyed when they were young 60
- In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today 60
- A teacher s ability to relate well with students is more important than excellent knowledge of the subject being taught 78
- Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. 76
- The most important quality for coworker 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...ree with the statement that mom and dad are best teachers. I will explore those reasons ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a wit' or simply 'wits'?
Suggestion: a wit; wits
...ly great lessons are taught not through a wits, but through a heart. The second id...
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: NEAR_BY
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
...the first is that my parents are always near by me, even if we are living on different ...
Line 5, column 621, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
...nfidence, got excellent mark and all of this thanks to my mom. She assists me every ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i mean, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47301587302 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59128138747 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5757706665 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.2608695652 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6956521739 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30434782609 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157043477697 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421298081759 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654875405915 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108418778478 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441997893569 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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