parents are now more involved in their kids education
Parenthood is not just a word- it's a way of life and a responsibility toward our kids and our communities. Some people say that parents are know more engaged in their kids education, and others have different point of view. In my opinion, I think that parents provide an enormous assistance for their kids education in order to ensure that are well prepared for, and that for two which I will explain in deep details in the upcoming paragraphs.
first and foremost, in almost all countries, the in person learning process is banned due to the uncontrolled overspread of the Corona virus, and students haven't the ability to go to school. Therefore, parents became more concerned in their kids education by explaining for them hard lessons, and keeping them in the path of success during this hard time. My experience is a compelling example for that. Since March 2020, my kids didn't attend school because all districts were concerned about the student to not catch this malicious Corona virus. So, all kids were obligated to stay home and study without the help of their teacher, then I became involved in my kids' education by assisting them in understanding their lessons. In my experience, parents are playing a crucial role in their kids' education.
Second of all, parents always want their kids in better position, and also receive the best education. Thus, they always assist their kids in understanding complicated lessons, especially science and math because those subject represent the core of education. Moreover, if parents can't explain hard school's lessons, they may pay for a tutor to provide the necessary help for their kids, and that is considered as an indirect implication in their children's education. For instance, when my kids reached high school, they started to study harsh subjects like chemistry. Unfortunately, I couldn't explain for them the chemistry lessons because my major was in history. So, I payed for a private chemistry teacher in order to make sure that my children were well educated and were going in the path of success. As you can see, parents are always involved in their kids' education even if they help them indirectly.
All in all, I am with the opinion that parents are more concerned with their kids' education because of the hard situation that mandated all kids to stay home and receive homeschooling. In addition, parents always want to see r kids successful so if they can't help them directly, they assign professional persons to educate their kids. Therefore, I hope that governments provide more support for parents that have kids in different educational stages in order to create more successful and progressive generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0404494382 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74864257049 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487640449438 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8441899339 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.052631579 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4210526316 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415556919057 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151990072579 0.076458572812 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110394885947 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30579739927 0.150856017488 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054352100505 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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