Considering the life as a modern and newly environment, most jobs and their requirment would change over the cors of time. through passing this modern and technological environmnet people should adopt their job with an updating demands. In fact, development environment effectively influenc on peoples carear which is realy desater the future job opportunities. As far as I am concern former life was so easier in case of secure job following with success than newly. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, by developing the technology some carears will obsolated and other will provide new opportunity for individuals. As a result of this phenamena people may loos their possition in some criyeria which sound impossible and have changed their approach to deal with diffrent issues. For example, consider the manifactuers in the past which involved larger amounts of labors with itself to prouduce a products. by increasing the level of technological material in modern days this manufactures had to abolish deloug number of woker from that and use some development mashines which is the symptome s of the modern societes. this change in this case clearly indicates the rule of advanced technology mashin and their negative impacts on peoples's carear which is realy aredous to contrlo and mange it.
Second, Due to the compettetive environment that humane are experincing, an abrupt change would be happend that every one's carear would be influened bt them. regardless the sudden event that happen in every daily schadules of people's life finding carear and being succesful becomeing a risky and some how chancy. In other word people must be more contious about their environment and adopt themselves with every new event. One of my own exampe is a good case in point. I was working as an engineer in a large and safe economic com. An abrupt chanf=ge happent in the world in case of infection deseas, which couse many negative effects on the worlds job opportunity Due to the fact that govenment and many companyes had decided to spend their mony to addres this conflict which engaged all the people with itself. I loosed my job also I had to justify my carear with new circomstances.
In conclusion, I frmly agree that finding job in the former era was easier than today. It not only is for the development of technology but also is for sudden chanf=ge that are continuly involved with the earth problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96610169492 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72777458409 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530266343826 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9348637626 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.947368421 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113329362753 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407812329961 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559961641561 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828186880818 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605976977113 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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