In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Making decisions plays a pivotal role in the future of people's lives. Especially young peoples' decisions can change their fate. Therefore, it is of high importance to make right decisions. One of controversial questions among scholars is whether today young people depend on their parents less than past on making decisions. I believe this statement is valid due to a couple of reasons. In the following paragraphs, I will describe the most important reasons supporting my viewpoint.
First reason to be mentioned is that nowadays accessing information is much easier compared to the past. Now we have access to tremendous amount of knowledge by means of technology. Millions of records are available in libraries as books and most of them have electronic versions too. So, we can use knowledge of centuries by a laptop in our home. However, in the past people did not have such possibilities and their only source of information was their ancestors experiences. Therefore, young people often referred to their parents to take advantage of their knowledge and experiences. Nowadays, young people know more about fields such as technology than older people do by using apps and search engines.
Another reason is that in the past people were more dependent on their parents. Children mostly followed their father's job and lived close to their parents and as a result, they were more financially dependent on their parents. All of these factors resulted in a higher influence by their parents in every aspect of life including making decisions. On the other hand, today young people have their own jobs and live away from their parents even in another country. Therefore, they are more independent on every aspect of their lives. Moreover, today young people are more interested to choose their lifestyle and follow their dreams. Since they understand the value of the life and the fact that they are responsible for their decisions and future not their parents. In addition, they look up to successful people who paved their path toward success by deciding to go with their own interests and decisions instead of their parents.
To sum it up, today young people are more independent compared to the past and they want to choose their path by themselves. Moreover, today we all have access to knowledge that can be used in helping young people to decide wisely.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0537084399 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66102423269 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493606138107 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.931617085 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9130434783 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47826086957 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.534949839713 0.236089414692 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160630240083 0.076458572812 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107867788785 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330437507558 0.150856017488 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809205027289 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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