Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, most of the people lead a hectic life. One of controversial questions regarding this matter is whether it is necessary for young people to be able to plan and organize. I believe this statement is true. In the following paragraphs, I will describe the most important reasons supporting my viewpoint.
First, as we all know planning and organizing can help to save a huge amount of time. If we have a plan for our works it will prevent wasting time. Since, it is very probable to get lost and wander if a definite plan has not been defined. This is of great importance in projects which have a tremendous amount of work and the time is limited. For example, in college I had a project in end of semester which was very important in my final grade. But I did not had enough time since I had to do other assignments and take exams. Therefore, I write a plan to complete the project in the specified time and I did some of work every day. However, my colleges who had more time compared to me could not complete the project because they did not have a good plan and wasted most of their time. Thus, in the modern life that we have less time having ability to plan and organize will buy us some time.
Second, having a plan helps to be less stressed out. This is very important especially for the young people who have to deal with a great amount of stress and tension. People who are able to organize and plan their work know what they should do in every day. Therefore, they do not become stressed out because of the tasks they should do. In other words, having a plan releases some of your stress as you know that you know you can finish the work in the specified time. For instance, my friend was assigned to do a task in his work in a limited time. She became stressed out as she believed that it was not possible to do it before the deadline. However, after creating a plan for the task she became released.
So to sum it up, having ability to plan and organize can save some time especially in the modern life that we do not have enough time to do all of our tasks. Moreover, planning decreases stress and tension.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ortant in my final grade. But I did not had enough time since I had to do other ass...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...lan their work know what they should do in every day. Therefore, they do not become stressed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, you know, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.325 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36936700408 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6950259376 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2173913043 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3913043478 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271909328963 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830275934556 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483002598704 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17941807058 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267228424054 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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