People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with strongly development in many different spheres around the world, attending college or university now has become the best choice for people who want to create new opportunities in their future. As a result, each person has his/her own reasons to apply for college or university; for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge, etc. From my opinion of view, in which many reasons, the latter is more common as research in-depth knowledge speciaility, increased employment opportunity and build new relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Nowadays, with strongly development in many different spheres around the world, attending col...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 43.0788530466 9% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 52.1666666667 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 466.0 1977.66487455 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 82.0 407.700716846 20% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68292682927 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.00921669843 4.48103885553 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11517939342 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 212.727598566 31% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.817073170732 0.524837075471 156% => OK
syllable_count: 144.9 618.680645161 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 19.3620476419 48.9658058833 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 155.333333333 100.406767564 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375947555014 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210708129185 0.076458572812 276% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982833028854 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375947555014 0.150856017488 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 10.9000537634 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.01818996416 134% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.002688172 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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