People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with strongly development in many different spheres around the world, attending college or university now has become the best choice for people who want to create new opportunities in their future. As a result, each person has his/her own reasons to apply for college or university; for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge, etc. From my opinion of view, in which many reasons, the latter is more common as, prepare for a career, make more money in the job market.
Compared to high school, be at college or university certainly, you are researched in – depth knowledge and developed skill that help you create many new opportunities for ourselves to completely change future. This has actually been demonstrated by amount graduated students who have seriously preparation for career are recruited than higher the other ones no attending every year.The very first benefit is great role of knowledge and skill that we accumulated during learning process help us compete with other ones when finding job in big companies. For example, in the position of employer, if choosing between a person who is educated, have working office skills and the other no have it, I believe the first one become your employee. Besides, at university, good academic staffs with professors specialty who have high academic rank help you learn about a particular subject in depth. For instance, in criminal law lesson, basing on their own detail researches, they specifically analysis the different from causing an accidental injury and committing premeditated murder that easily be wrong during solving case.
It is obvious from all the above mentioned and discussed, taking in college or university has been still to most student wisdom who graduated high school want to develop themselves and for adult need chances to succeed in future from rapport with new friends, expertise which be taught at there and many other skills like as behavior, lecture or debate
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, if, so, still, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25157232704 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73556710757 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2727705451 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.555555556 100.406767564 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 20.6045352989 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305938483154 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127548461631 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939708941985 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212999419061 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114753436792 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 11.7677419355 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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