People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university?
People may have attended college or university for various reasons. In my point of view, most people think college and university is the only way they can have bright future, and they try to be perceived successful person by attending to the college and university.
Now a day, most of the people think they have to eligible for good job and also have wonderful experience like educational traveling, lecturing and etc to be considered as a successful person. To being so, they find university to become the one who others think is the best. People can earn a lot of experience through attending a university. For example my cousin she studies pharmacology and also attends in social meeting and presentation to improve her educational knowledge and life experience and other people considered her as a successful person in her career and life.
Another reason people may want to go to college is maybe they become independent of their parents. Most of the people who attend the college or university are between 18 and 22 age. In this age young people are being mature and one of the sign of this is they want to be independent. By going to university they can find this freedom. They live separate from their parent and sometimes they may change their living city to go to special college. By focusing on autonomous characteristics of this age we can explain the reason why lots of people want to go to college or university.
In summary, I think get new various experience by meeting new people at university and interact with them besides other benefits of being independent person are the reasons people want to attend to university. By doing so, they are perceived successful person in the eyes of family an others and make feel of confidence for themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...make feel of confidence for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, for example, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84210526316 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77758607756 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453947368421 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.556006442 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35251664979 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148733830846 0.076458572812 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10333987411 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247357400531 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065777026659 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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