People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Traveling is a hobby for some people or it is boring for some, who don't want to enjoy it. It also depends on whether you are traveling in same country as your country of origin or you are traveling to different country. I believe that people will benefit more from traveling to foreign countries. Hence, I disagree with the statement that people benefits more from traveling in their own country.
First and foremost, by visiting foreign countries we can get to know about various cultures, religions, people, their lifestyle, their approach towards different things, etc. Whereas traveling in same our own country we will see same people, same culture and same language, unless there is country like India, where all religion and cultures are followed. Furthermore, there are thousands of languages spoken in India.
Secondly, the major difference in traveling in different country and traveling in own country is the means of traveling. Generally, in our own country we will prefer traveling by car, bus or train, while traveling to foreign country we have to opt for aeroplane. Furthermore, while traveling in planes we can talk to people of other countries and get to learn from them. However, in the same country, we will not find exciting to talk to citizens of our own country in trains or buses.
'Lastly, in different countries there is different means of transport. For instance, in Japan, metro trains are the most effective transportation while in USA, majority of people uses either cars or planes. In addition, Japan is known for its correct and efficient timing of metro trains. So, if an US person visits Japan then he/she will enjoy a ride in metro.
In conclusion, the benefits of traveling in other countries includes learning different cultures, languages, etc. In addition, we will get to know about various ways of transportation. Hence, I believe that there is more benefit in traveling to foreign nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.090625 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72311969244 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48125 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5807785759 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457681759724 0.236089414692 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165767285841 0.076458572812 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164727068155 0.0737576698707 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269059884788 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182596880281 0.0645574589148 283% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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