People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries
As far as I am concerned, there are more benefits for people to travel in their own country because it is more convenient and its expenses are lower. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint my case.
The first reason worth mentioning is that it is more comfortable and easy for people to travel in their own country. Each country has a unique and official language that most people use. As a result, people from one country can communicate without any difficulty. It is plausible that different languages are used in many countries, but they all have an official one that all residents are familiar with. However, traveling abroad is more complex since people need to know the language of that country, and because of it, communication will become harder for people. For instance, my friend went on travel inside our country. Since he knew the language, he learned about the culture and customs of that place. But his trip to France was arduous for him. Although he was familiar with English, most people speak French, and he could not socialize with other people, which made him miserable.
A further more subtle point is that it does not require a lot of money and it's cheaper. In recent years, since oil price has increased, tickets for airplanes have become very expensive, which many people cannot afford. Also, our country's currency has lesser value in comparison to other countries. Therefore, the option of traveling abroad is not a possibility. Nevertheless, traveling inside our country does not need a lot of money, and if people could not buy a ticket for an airplane, they could use their cars or even rent it. In this way, travelers could decline their expenses and save their money for better costs. Moreover, there are more enjoyments for people in driving. They could enjoy the environment, take a break whenever they wanted, or even visit beautiful places they encountered along the way. For these kinds of people, the duration of airplane travel is extremely tiresome. Therefore, They get bored quickly, cannot enjoy the trip, and consider it a waste of time.
To make a long story short, based on the arguments mentioned above, there are more advantages for people to travel inside their own country due to ease in traveling inside the country and lower cost and expenses.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90025575448 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53686266666 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531969309463 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4808070131 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7727272727 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363043838585 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105346395603 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107351148829 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26943783973 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602970036691 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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