People learn things better from those at their own level—such as fellow students or co-workers—than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are different ways to gain knowledge. One of these ways is asking the experienced people because they are have more knowledge. On the other hand, some people believe that they can get learning from their co-workers becasue there is no communication gap between them. In my opinion, I think asking the supervisors or the teachers is a better option. I feel that way for two main reasons.
First of all, learning knowledge from teachers is superior because they are experienced so they can give us the topic in details. The gain their knowledge through deep studying not from any superficial reading. For example, when I was a student in pharmacy college. I had a difficulty in my chemistry class. Rather than asking my professor about my problem, I asked my classmat becasue I tthought he could explain the material for more better or in asimple way. And also I was very shy to speak with the professor during the lecture. Any way I got the answer which turned out to be far from right. In my monthly assignment, I did not do well because i misunderstood the problem. Finally I got bad grades. If I asked my peofessor my question, I would not get that grades and I was more aware about my topic.
Furthermore, getting the information form the experienced people helps to save time. They are able to answer the question in a short time. Since this is not the first time they encounter those questions. They answered those questions before. For instance, when I was working in a community pharmacy, I got a veriety of questions and explainations from my patients. Rather searching for what they needed, I just called my supervisior becasue he was not always availble and left a message for him with the question with it. I was able because of that to be trust worthy for all my patients becaus I always gave them the right answer and learned them how they could use the medication.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...the experienced people because they are have more knowledge. On the other hand, some...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... feel that way for two main reasons. First of all, learning knowledge from te...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ought he could explain the material for more better or in asimple way. And also I was very ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y assignment, I did not do well because i misunderstood the problem. Finally I go...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ll because i misunderstood the problem. Finally I got bad grades. If I asked my peofess...
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...and I was more aware about my topic. Furthermore, getting the information for...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to answer the question in a short time. Since this is not the first time they encount...
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...encounter those questions. They answered those questions before. For instance, wh...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...ons and explainations from my patients. Rather searching for what they needed, I just ...
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...e them the right answer and learned them how they could use the medication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66167664671 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68683008398 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52994011976 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9604980035 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7727272727 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123468939554 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408218964876 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423661736102 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950534089387 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216052606628 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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