A person should never make an important decision alone
As the people have become more independent in current times; they have started to refrain from involving other people in important occasions and decisions of their life. The prompt suggests that a person should make an important decision all by themselves. I agree to the statement presented in the prompt, that a person should never make an important decision alone due to the following three reasons.
Firstly, the decision making ability of a person is highly influenced by their emotions. There is a saying- "never make an important decision when you are happy, sad or angry". This saying holds true, because a person is more likely to make bad decisions when they are not in a neutral emotional state. For instance, a survey conducted in early 2000's provides an interesting insight into this concept. This survey performed among over 100 people who belonged to different professions states that people who had encountered a bad event in the morning time, ended up having a bad day. This example illustrates how one incident that impacted the emotional state of a person at a much earlier time of the day lead them to make wrong decisions for the entire day, leading to a series of bad incidents as a result.
Further, if a person is making an important decision, then it is very likely that he is not the only one impacted by the consequences. Usually big decisions such as moving to a new country or city ends up impacting the people close to the person who is making the decision. For instance, if a person needs to relocate to a new place or shift their house, then their wife or children will be impacted as they will need to make similar changes along with the person. Hence, taking such huge decision entirely by oneself is not fair to those people who are also impacted by those decisions. The people close to the person who is required to make the decision, need to have a say in the decision.
Lastly, not everyone has the ability to make decisions themselves. This is indeed the case with so many people who do not have the confidence to make decision. This can be mainly because of few reasons such as less experience or insufficient knowledge. For instance, a student needs to choose a set of courses for masters but the student does not completely understand the pros and cons of studying those subjects. This is leading the student to ruminate over the decision for a long time leading to additional stress. The situation in this example can easily be resolved by taking help from the school alumnae or teachers. Therefore, stressing over making the decision alone is not always a good idea.
Some people may say that one should make their own decisions on their own, as no one is better judge of their own situations other than themselves. But isn't that exactly why people should involve their family members and close friends in their important decisions? Involving other people in major life decisions creates a group of well wishers and strong bonds between families; tackling a problem and finding the solution makes people come closer and understand each other's situation by putting themselves in their shoes. Involving near and dear ones in difficult situations helps to build a closely nested web of well wishers, as they start understanding your problems and connect with you emotionally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
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Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... people come closer and understand each others situation by putting themselves in thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2763.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 570.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84736842105 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88617158649 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61791834488 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478947368421 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 869.4 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7785591912 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.52 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400984665687 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135550276484 0.076458572812 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142161778691 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251851962167 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154338613308 0.0645574589148 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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