Pets should be treated like family members

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Pets should be treated like family members

many people in all over the world treated pets. some people
think that pets should be treated like family members. I am
agreed with this statement, for few reasons:
First, the pets feeling our love, so they return love. Moreover, if
we take care for them, and treated them like family members,
this mean bring them food and water, take them for a walk,
wash them once a month, take them sometimes to the doctor
and many other things. Then we get back, the pets will be
loyalty, they will protect us, they will be there when you need
them. For example, dogs, or like people love to say: "the best
friend of the person". he always will come to say you hello.
Although, he don’t know to talk, if you will be sad he will come
and help you to cope with the problem.
Second, in some level in our life, we start own life, we married,
bought a new house and maybe prepare to bring a child. The
pets will be really good opportunity for us, like the children
pets need our care, so we can see if we don’t cope with a pets,
we don’t ready for a child. For example, dogs, you need really
to care for him, so if you look at him like a nuisece. you don’t
ready.
By other hand, I can to understand people that disagree with
this statement, because sometime the pets are unfriendly, and
dangerous, but most of the time and most of the pets are
absolutely ok.
For conclusion, of course there is some disadvantage in treated
pets, but there is more advantage. that’s why I believe pets
should be treated like family members.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, so, then, for example, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31317236488 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501754385965 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9289244181 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.53405017921 551% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287307274783 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125666106052 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178399939907 0.0737576698707 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100493899743 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165108786667 0.0645574589148 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 86.8835125448 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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