playing computer games is a waste of time and children should not be allowed to play with them
Time is a very useful thing and we should not waste them on vestigial things. If the time we have can be invested in learning and doing some productive work then we can get full advantage of it. Some people believe that playing computer games is a waste of time and children should not be allowed to play with them. I completely agree with this point. As playing computer games have more disadvantages than advantages to the children, they will not only have a bad effect on mental health but also on physical health.
First of all, children play computer games for a very long period and hence they waste their precious time of studies. As the different stages in the computer games are fascinating they keep children engaged in playing more stages. Hence, children use to play for a very long time without their studies. For example, my cousin always uses to play computer games for longer periods and does not study at all, and he got failed in his school exams now he feels regret about the time he wasted. Thus, playing computer games for a long time will be the waste of time for children.
Additionally, computers games have bad effects on children health. Since the children play for a longer period, the brightness of the computer screen can cause eyesight problems among the children. Also sitting in a same posture will cause back problems at an early age. These problems can get worse in the future if parents keep allowing their children to play computer games. Also, the children will not be physically fit because they don't play outdoor games. Therefore, playing computer games will directly affect the health of children.
Lastly, computer games make children less social. This is because the children use to play on the computer whole day and hence they avoid going outside with friends or family. As a result, they became less talkative after some time, they might feel shyness in talking with unknown people. Again, if the children are studying in groups then some children can't do well as they are not social and hence feel hesitation in asking the question to even their friends. Thus, computer games are not good for children.
Thus, there are lots of disadvantages to playing computer games than advantages. therefore, I agree that playing a computer is a waste of time and parents should not allow their children to play them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82555282555 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34747266095 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447174447174 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7393500213 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3913043478 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6956521739 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.619518807251 0.236089414692 262% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230712885883 0.076458572812 302% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181718900452 0.0737576698707 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.422834769025 0.150856017488 280% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127735245146 0.0645574589148 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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