Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
The recent development of technology leads to a change in the values and attitudes of the young generation. Computer games became the favorite squandering of valuable time. However, I personally believe that playing over the internet has some benefits to the children if parents can oversee and control the timelimit for the use of computers. I have three main rationales for holding this opinion, and I will develop them in the following paragraphs.
First of all, some games improve children's ability to play as a team with others. In other words, children can develop their communication skills and team spirit through this means. In games like 'Ghost Run' and 'Temple Haunt' people can work in a group of five or four to chase the enemy and find the treasure. Therefore, they must follow strict communication and planning to win the game. This can definitely improve not only children's speaking but the opportunity to work as a team leader or a team player which in turn improves a child's behavior and studies. Furthermore, they will not have shy to speak to teachers or strangers and these games can ameliorate the helping mentality as they achieved from teamwork in the games.
Next, people can feel happiness caused by winning the game. Nowadays, people are facing high levels of stress from every field they are working in. As a consequence, everyone tries to alleviate stress by engaging in any type of entertainment like watching movies, sitcoms, or playing games. It's been proved by the medical field that playing computer games is the easiest and fastest stress reliever. This can relieve anxiety in the human body by reducing the stress hormone levels. As a result, winning in games can make a person's mind free from surrounding stress. For instance, my husband got a rejection from his last attended interview and he was so depressed. But he tried to deviate his mind from the failure to computer games which made him overcome that unstable time.
Finally, playing games is the best remedy to overcome fear and is a legitimate means of spending time especially in times of pandemic like COVID-19. The fear of pandemic can cause depression or severe anxiety in people. If they utilize free time with games or play station, they can reduce their stress of unemployment or work strain. Moreover, in some games like 'Mafia Kings', we can attempt new things like playing with guns that are not practical in daily life.
In sum, playing computer games have so many merits if they are used purposefully. It can improve child's attributes and can relieve stress and anxiety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94482758621 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60076109067 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1213834504 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25687684283 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795541143661 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746143661625 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159920474619 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030128065005 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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