Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them
Computer has bacome a part and parcel of our life now-a-days. From doing complex mathematics to being a source of entertainment, computer is used everywhere. Here, the statement posits that playing computer games is a waste of time and the children should not be allowed to play these games. I don't completely agree with the statement. This is for several reasons.
Children are very much attracted by things that are vibrant in color and fun to interact with. So, it is possible to devise learning materials as a game. For example, there are many computer games available in the market, which can help a children to learn the alphabents with the help of songs and colorful pictures. These games can become an effective medium to help the children learn new things. I have a niece whom I have seen to learn counting and tables of numbers through computer games.
There are other ways how games can be functional and useful for the children. There are various computer games which can help a child to build different skills. In my experience, I have seen a my younger sister to learn typing by playing a game which plays very soothing tunes while giving tasks to complete typing different words. She became very proficient in typing by playing that game. Also, there are games that can bulid the general knowledge. For example, a game showing flags and asking the child to identify the country. With the increasing paucity of playgrounds, such computer games can become a source of enterntainment and refreshment for the children.
Although, these positive sides cannot completely rule out the negative sides of computer games. playing games can become an adiction and can have significant adverse health impact from sitting in front of the computer for longer period of time. There are some games that promotes violence. Children being malleable, can become violent by taking those games seriously. But proper supervision of how much time and what games the children are playing can address these problems.
In conclusion, how a technology will be used depends upon us. From the examples presented above, it can be said that computer games with teaching focus are available. This can help children to grow and even learn new skill. With careful overwathch. it is possible to circumvent the negative effects of the computer games and use it as a learning tool for the children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...available in the market, which can help a children to learn the alphabents with the help o...
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Suggestion: to count
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'my'?
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to type'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9775 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59864267455 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0538929077 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7407407407 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8148148148 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92592592593 5.45110844103 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400875716386 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113976572404 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127858602167 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257020434668 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107933659694 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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