PO-04 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
people opt for a mode of transportation that allows them to reach their destination in less time. In this busy world, people do not want to waste their precious time so they prefer to utilize their time by opting fastest medium of travel. Therefore, I believe that in the future there will be fewer cars than at present date. I will expound on this in the following essay.
Firstly, increase in population has increased the use of cars as one of the modes of transportation because of which pollution has also doubled. According to the pollution control board, due to the burning of fuel, pollution has increased by 15% in the last five years. this has concerned the environment association to control the gas emission from the vehicle so that it does not affect the weather condition as well as the health of the public. To solve this problem, the government has already constructed electric metro and brought electric buses, so that it can help curb pollution and provide the fastest mode of public transportation. Along with this, citizens will also prefer to use the metro over the petrol buses because it is cheaper, comparatively. Moreover, government has also decided to limit the use of cars so that it helps to control the level of air contamination. For instance, In Delhi, the Capital of India, Central government has come up with the rule to restrict the use of cars on weekends, except for emergency purposes so that people should constrain themselves to walk for the shortest distance. due to these reasons, especially a concern for the protection of the natural environment, it is possible that In the twenties there will be less use of automobiles in comparison to today.
Secondly, when people will use public transport such as the metro or electric bus then automatically use of automobiles will reduce because it will help people to get rid of a long time taking traffic and help them reach their destination on time. For example, when I was in bangalore, and unaware of the city traffic condition. I got stuck in long traffic for 2 hours. After that, I decided to use the metro to go to my office. Usually, bangalore or other big cities are famous for annoying traffic as result people prefer other ways. this not only save their time but also their money by not buying their own vehicle to cover a large distance.
In conclusion, I would like to say that sooner use of cars or personal vehicle will become less in comparison to present scenario so that people reach their destination on time rather than getting stuck in the traffic for long hours, and will save their money for not utilizing own heir vehicle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
people opt for a mode of transportation that a...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'opting the fastest'.
Suggestion: opting the fastest
...so they prefer to utilize their time by opting fastest medium of travel. Therefore, I believe ...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ncreased by 15% in the last five years. this has concerned the environment associati...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...lves to walk for the shortest distance. due to these reasons, especially a concern ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...fic as result people prefer other ways. this not only save their time but also their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, except for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77947598253 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66960932409 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473799126638 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3321689877 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.210526316 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1052631579 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152958313509 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542147016116 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545490252968 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995327947497 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219609321142 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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