Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Who can claim that their old and close friends do not have value for them? As we all know, our friends are one of the most valuable "properties" that a person has. However, in some conditions, we have to change our city or country to find new opportunities. In this regard, some are of the opinion that we should not leave our friends in any condition, while others believe that we should follow our dream lives, and changing our city or country sometimes is necessary. I agree with the second idea rather than the first one for two main reasons which will be presented here.
First, in today's modern life, economic condition is one of the most challenging issues for most of the people, and people try to improve their economic condition. Therefore, in some conditions, it is better for us to change our city and country. We all may experience harsh economic circumstances, but we do not have any supporters. Even our close and old friends may not have the ability to help us. Therefore, we may face economic problems that reduce our life quality, and having friends is not a solution for us.
Second, Human beings are always seeking ways to develop, and finding new places for living is one of the nature of humans. Man has needs that he or she cannot respond to them in their country. The needs such as freedom, human rights, and avoiding discrimination against them are the motivation for many immigrants. We can see a lot of people in the world who prefer to leave their families, dreams, and properties in their city and country for finding new opportunities. As a result, sometimes, we are forced to change our city, country, and our valuable friends.
In conclusion, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that sometimes we should change our living place and friends for reaching our goals. In my opinion, two factors play a vital role. the first one is that we want to improve our economic condition, and the second one is that sometimes we are forced to immigrate to other places to find a new free place for living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67768595041 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74204198611 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468319559229 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2528097995 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137150023939 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533056766869 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040256679663 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957269729812 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295026754383 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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