Self employed vs employed

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Self-employed vs. employed

Some people believe that being employed is all that an adult should do to make his/her living comfortable and better life. However, in my opinion, I believe that being self-employed is a better choice to make than being just employed in some companies run by other bosses for three reasons mentioned below.
First of all, being self-employed is better than being just employed because we can enjoy independence and we have freedom for our choices. For example, if I have my own company then it is easier for me to take risky and tough decisions. In contrast, if I am working under other bosses then I should take permissions, do all the paperwork which may not be reasonable enough. So, if we are self-employed then we can take any decisions and follow our gut feeling, and that may not be a case if we are employed under the leadership of others.
Second of all, I prefer to be self employed for the reason that I can employ other people and uplift the living of many people. For example, several businessmen who are running businesses over globe, employ many people in their company and industry and are uplifting their living standard. However, if we are employed under other individuals then we are just making our lives better not the society. Thus, if we are self-employed and can help other people then it will be a very good choice to make.
Thirdly, self-employment is better because we can take risk and make choices according to our will. For instance, individual running a small food stall in street can prepare food and sell his goods in the price that may yield profits just for his/her living. Whereas, in case of being employed we should follow the rules of restaurants and fixed charges for the foods. Thus, if we are self employed then we can provide foods from our side by just reaping off the profits required to make our living unlike star restaurants that charge exorbitant prices for the service of food not the food itself.
To sum up, while being employed may have some of the perks, the benefits of being self-employed clearly outweighs the benefits offered by being just employed as illustrated by the three reasons mentioned above.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...o sum up, while being employed may have some of the perks, the benefits of being self-emplo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74535809019 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58961212261 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442970822281 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4672297257 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.266666667 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337379133493 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168961414141 0.076458572812 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110065875764 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256426808441 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538730739206 0.0645574589148 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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