Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
People have the greatest power in politics. The prompt suggests two different spectrums regarding how a political leader should act. I mostly agree with the statement that political leader should remain calm and consistently committed to particular principles and objectives rather than following the paths paved by public opinion. In order to strengthen my opinion i will like to explain in three major points mentioned below.
First of all, principles and objectives are a set of well defined, scientifically researched set of points in order to achieve a particular goal. A political leader who firmly stays attached to those particular set of principles and objectives are more likely to take rigid plans for the overall holistic development. for instance; the supreme leader of Dubai who had his strict set of plans for the development of his place. He made some extraordinary development and want his place to stand out best among all other. Dubai has been a hub for tourists and IT companies globally.
Secondly, people are like wax and can be easily shaped and mold by powerful people. People are prone to follow the whims and some fantasy presented in front of them. In this case, if a political leader follows public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise then that can lead to severe disaster.
Thirdly, We have seen many developing countries moving at their acme of development process. This all comes to narrow down at the political situation and political leader of the country. For instance; China is a growing economy. Under the leadership of president Xi jinping China has moved forward in almost every sector. president Xi jinping is standing example of how a political leader should deal with the people. He is humble with the people at the same time completely follows the set of communist principles.
In conclusion, although a political leader should listen carefully to public opinion and establish a cordial relationship, at the same time, he should be bold enough to take decisions and follow the principles and objectives. So, I mostly agree with the statement that political leader should remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18156424581 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83589995927 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519553072626 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7288989813 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288910134329 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843149823386 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687270987071 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171583652959 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538297125051 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.