Should children spend most of the time playing and studying or they should be required to help the family with household chores, like cooking and cleaning
In today's modern world parents have a variety of options how to grow their children. What features to inoculate them and with knowledge to impart. I think kids should be rise in the environment where they share responsibilities of an adult in order to become one some day. I will broach some reasons that validate my position.
To begin with, children should face fewer affairs than the adults but they have to learn that life is not only for playing and studying it is full of daily routines like cleaning, cooking and others. that way they will be able to be responsible for creating of a favorable environment around them and help their relatives. Foremost it will brings kids new possibilities to study new things. when I was a teenager my mother began to teach me how to cook. At first, all my job was just peeling vegetables and chopping them in particular way. Then she taught me how to cook soups and chicken salads, those were her favorite meals. when I went to the college I lived in dormitory and cooked for myself and taught another students to do it. it was fun and reasonable saving of not going to the coffee. Moreover kids who will learn those daily simple routines will learn not only be responsible but also ability to manage their time wisely.
Second reason for my choice, is that children will learn that everyone should brings something useful to the community. helping their parents at the kitchen or elsewhere kids will learn to be fruitful and impatience to people who around them. they would help another person with a pleasure and teach their own children the same. being helpful to the community is a high priority for the most of the people.Because we are human beings and we need to live in groups among people, we are social creatures. children who taught this way will adjust to the community faster and won't have any difficulties in living their life among people.
To be clear, the advantages for children to be exposed to some amount of work at their house will shape their minds and habits in the right direction. Eventually kids become adults with proper character.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, i think, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71351351351 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49056657023 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543243243243 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3881170643 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227212506024 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644252605712 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059930401225 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137406317851 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393721249577 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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