Should government invest more on improving roads or improving public transports

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Governments decision to invest whether on improving roads and h...
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...vernments decision to invest whether on improving roads and highways or on impro...
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...oads and highways or on improving public transportation totally depends on the co...
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...icular place. If I am obliged to choose any one , taking reference of my own country , ...
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...one , taking reference of my own country , I think government should spend more on...
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...eel this way because of two main reasons , which I will explore in following parag...
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...s. Firstly, There are not sufficient means of public transportation. The exis...
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...are mostly late and often fully loaded. it is too difficult to travel in public bu...
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...oo difficult to travel in public buses. it not only delays people work but people...
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...t to travel in public buses. it not only delays people work but people are often ...
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... the long standing they did on the bus. only the people from first or second bus sta...
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...lic buses is truly pathetic. For example , I had a friend in college , who used t...
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...y pathetic. For example , I had a friend in college , who used to come by public ...
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...For example , I had a friend in college , who used to come by public bus .Someday...
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...college , who used to come by public bus .Somedays he used to arrive on time but m...
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...llege , who used to come by public bus .Somedays he used to arrive on time but mostly he...
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...the reason is buses not arriving on time or the particular bus on which he was co...
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...n which he was coming had some problem. due to less number of buses , the time betw...
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...ome problem. due to less number of buses , the time between two buses were half ho...
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...he time between two buses were half hour . this had been the problem of many stude...
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... of many students and working employee. so, government should invest on increasing...
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...roving public transport. In addition , many people tend to buy personal vehicl...
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...ersonal vehicles due to the ineffective pubic transport. this causes a serious proble...
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... pubic transport. this causes a serious problems like pollution and traffic jam. Moreove...
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...ported very bad pollution that affected the the respiratory health of many people .it w...
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...s that people switch to private vehicles only because of the problems that exist ...
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...roblems that exist in public transport. so , better public transport will definite...
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...ed to a greater level. In conclusion , Government should give more emphasis to...
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... Government should give more emphasis to improve the public transport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00777202073 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67244147254 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533678756477 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.223895543 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0434782609 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7826086957 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.5376344086 632% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378728217139 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114557699803 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181038856066 0.0737576698707 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329953457392 0.150856017488 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193146998285 0.0645574589148 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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