Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Development the big constructions means try to build the infrastructures or making the highways and new roads for tracks between two countries. Oh the other hand, I believe that government should improving public transportations (buses, trains, subways, trams and metro bus). So, I think people love this work. If government improve transportation, people can use this facilities. On the other hand, they pay taxes and they need more comfort things. I think it is very common that when we pay taxes, then we want some more facilities like, trains, subways, trams and metro. So, I have few reasons for this causes.
First, people are paying some taxes like, roads tax it means that they need improved roads. For instance, in Afghanistan we pay tax for roads. But, we do not have a concrete roads. So, we cannot bring our products in city or export them to another countries. Beside this, our products do have high qualities. So, my people do not like this situation. Moreover, I believe the government should improve the roads and beside, that try to improve transportation like, special train for our products. Due to, we are parts of agricultural economics and beside that, we are paying high taxes for transportation.
Next, buses are important and my people will be happy or love this idea if government improve the buses stations or transportation by buses. I love this idea. So, it is hopeful news for students if government improve buses transportation. For instance, when I was in India, rate for bus was expensive and after, few months march the government give some discounts for bus tickets and that day all students make a celebrity. Moreover, I prefer government should improve buses transportation I love this idea because my younger brother is still a student and he cannot provide more money on transportation. I like this idea if government improve buses transportation.
Last but not least, if government improve subways I will support that. Subways are important for transportation especially in big cities like, Tokyo, Tehran and Kabul. For instance, in city Kabul we do not have nice subways and always we are in traffic jam and it is a big trouble. However, I think my people will support the idea of improve the subways transportation. On the other hand, they will pay more taxes for improving subways transportation or construction new subways. It is brilliant idea. I like this idea.
Conclusion, I think it is nice idea if government improve roads and highways. On the other hand, I support idea that government improve transportation (buses, trains, subways). So, it is necessary for all countries to improve their subways. Due to, they gain some taxes to build subways and prevent traffic jams. On the other hand, buses transportation is like golden chance for all students because some students do not have car or can pay for taxi or metro bus. All in all, I love this idea that government transportation system like, subways, trains and buses and my friends will support this idea.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'constructions'' or 'construction's'?
Suggestion: constructions'; construction's
Development the big constructions means try to build the infrastructures ...
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Line 1, column 363, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... improve transportation, people can use this facilities. On the other hand, they pay...
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Line 1, column 600, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s and metro. So, I have few reasons for this causes. First, people are paying so...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o, I have few reasons for this causes. First, people are paying some taxes like...
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Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'road'?
Suggestion: road
...r roads. But, we do not have a concrete roads. So, we cannot bring our products in ci...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... paying high taxes for transportation. Next, buses are important and my people ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vernment improve buses transportation. Last but not least, if government improv...
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Line 4, column 350, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'subways'' or 'subway's'?
Suggestion: subways'; subway's
...le will support the idea of improve the subways transportation. On the other hand, they...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is brilliant idea. I like this idea. Conclusion, I think it is nice idea if g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 8.0752688172 396% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2512.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97425742574 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93073722204 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.380198019802 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 752.4 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7389293491 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8823529412 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8529411765 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241222673891 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776203628065 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832339924429 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161640900611 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439177370359 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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