should young people be given strict rules to be followed in society do you agree or disagree on this support with relevant examples and reasons

Essay topics:

should young people be given strict rules to be followed in society? do you agree or disagree on this. support with relevant examples and reasons.

I am strongly disagree with this topic. In my opinion, In the world everyone has their own freedom. Young people are new generation who knows what is right or wrong thing . as well as they are the creator of the future. So we should trust them rather than stick them in strict rules.
Young people are those who are going to handle society with their new thoughts to keep society on top. So if we try to bind them in strict rules, they can not make any better change which would be helpful for the society.

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Average: 4.3 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 52.1666666667 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 411.0 1977.66487455 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 96.0 407.700716846 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28125 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.13016916015 4.48103885553 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95952237039 2.67179642975 73% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 212.727598566 34% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.524837075471 143% => OK
syllable_count: 120.6 618.680645161 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7993298728 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.7142857143 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2005932375 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765296969265 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602581405755 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155493814713 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193639819438 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 86.8835125448 14% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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