Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Since the beginning of elementary school until high school, students must wear uniform in my country. Some people ask the student to wear school uniforms in the school. However, other believe that it harms some vital features such as self-confidence, creativity and family budget. From my vantage point, I concur with the latter group and the lines above will shed light on my stand point.

First exquisite point to mention is about uniform’s cost. Today, many family have struggled with making decent living. Even basic needs such as housing, foods are so expensive. To afford uniform’s cost can be hard for some families. It would be better for parents, if schools permit students to decide to what to wear. This option might cut some expenses in family budget. Furthermore, some mothers fed up with cleaning uniform.

Secondly, in approaching this issue, apart from what mentioned above, there is another subtle point which deserve some word. Wearing same clothes everyday might harm student’s creativity. They should boost their abilities and look the world in a myriad perfective. Moreover, free clothes option are ubiquitous all around the World. Even teachers bored traditional wear school style.

To sum up, taking all aforementioned reasons above, one cannot deny the freewill in student’s life. They can gain confident, If they decide to what they wear. Deciding what should they do can boost not only self-confident but also creativity. It is also good for family budget.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun family seems to be countable; consider using: 'many families'.
Suggestion: many families
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 241.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3112033195 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74468076445 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668049792531 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7345212718 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.0 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.05 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316733896282 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939553277042 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135330487773 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186171077217 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087014609304 0.0645574589148 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.63 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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