Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays requirements for students in high schools are becoming stricter and stricter than it used to be decades ago. Some schools obligate students to be dressed in uniforms, while others give freedom in this question. I am absolutely agree that wearing uniforms is better proceeding from the below mentioned reasons.
First of all, if people are dressed in uniforms, there is no income inequality. What I mean is that school's clothes are inexpensive and affordable for all classes of society. Nobody does not feel inconvenience due to their family's income. To prove my point of view, I would like to remember Chinese experience. In this country all students wear uniform since income disparity is extremely high.
Secondly, wearing uniforms of some famous high schools is able to make other people to proud you. For example, Harvard, Cambridge, MIT - all of them have own clothes with their signs, and people, who see students from such high schools, colleges and universities, give them esteem. That is why uniforms can be as a sign of prestige.
The last, but not the least, students in uniforms are better involved in the education process than when they have freedom in choosing clothes. There are no distracting factors not only for students, but also for teachers. Similarly, classical style of clothes is always up-to-date and relevant, and consequently, you do not need buy a new one every season. Besides, such clothes can be worn in everyday life and it look quite splendid and amazing.
To sum up, I would to say that a requirement to wear a school uniform is an excellent decision since students will not feel income disparity, will take pride their school and will be better engaged in their education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for example, i mean, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03135888502 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68697956488 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588850174216 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7861232615 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330934618918 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986268706293 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992416106522 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192625799873 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865431303623 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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