Smart phones are the necessity of life in this rapidly growing world. They help us to communicate, navigate, make life easier. Although some parents think that smart phones with internet access should not be provided to young children, I totally disagree with them because smart phones plays important role in young children's life too.
When I was in 5th standard, I was living away from my parents with my maternal family. Every time i used to miss my parents i had to check the availability of my uncle whether he is available or not at home so that i can talk to my parents. It was not comforting because i was dependent upon someone for my own happiness. Then i was provided a phone in 6th standard with internet availability, it made my life easier. I was able to see my parents through video conferencing.
I remember one incident of my school days when my best friend waited for his parents for about 1 hour, standing alone outside the school campus. He was not provided with any phone when he was in 6th standard. Due to some reasons his parents got late to pick him up after the school, that made him waited for them so long because he was not able to communicate with them because of unavailability of phone. A smart phone with internet availability can help children to trace their parents, in critical situations. It would help the children to connect with their parents or relatives more, and provide better security also.
Smart phones with internet availability not only makes our connection stronger but also make ourself develop better with the advance technology. Children can groom themselves through so many channels like Youtube in education field, learn new things, become more creative. Internet facility provide children's enormous benefits.
Conclusively, smart phones with internet access are the important tools not only for adults but also for young children to make them advance with this growing world and to build a strong connection with their owns, of course.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y. Every time i used to miss my parents i had to check the availability of my unc...
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... he is available or not at home so that i can talk to my parents. It was not comf...
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... parents. It was not comforting because i was dependent upon someone for my own h...
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...upon someone for my own happiness. Then i was provided a phone in 6th standard wi...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...tives more, and provide better security also. Smart phones with internet availabi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91150442478 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62490798383 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516224188791 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4959818043 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9411764706 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297630103235 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10558058622 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904059616206 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198810774275 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856896188839 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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