Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference.
life is full of challenges, difficulties and unexpected obstacles. Your family got over more problems than you and they knew how to live through it. Honest friends can always support you and never give incorrect advices to you. when you are live without help of others, you can fall and not get up due to some problems. because life can be at the same time difficult and easy. From my perspective, I agree with the statement, which says that the best way of learning about life, the advice of family and friends is more important than personal experience for several reasons.
First of all, in every unexpected situation you can get into a difficult state. life is not easy thing. I mean with last sentence that in life you can be in any condition. There will be people who can help such as parents and friends. every day parents support you financially and morally. they invest in your future. when I remember how I was born, this gives know that my parents never lie and only support. my own experience is a compelling example of this. I was finished eighth grade. In summer my brother asked for help. He was flying to another country. this help was to live sometime with grandmother. I couldn’t help him. because at this time I was in difficult situation. I was ill. At this time helped me only my mother. So, after this illness I had going to grandmother.
Secondly, parents lived through any problems. they know and see more than me. they never lie and only support. For instance, I needed some advices about university. because if I will apply without advice of parents, they know advantages and disadvantages of everything. I talked with them. after I had a motivation and everything what I wanted from them at that time.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people without whom you can not live are your parents. this is because of their support and live can be unexpectedly difficult.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7223880597 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63400319333 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510447761194 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.1344086022 50% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7175545474 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.4375 100.406767564 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.46875 20.6045352989 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143630194067 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324398850412 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561540019859 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920666587278 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562154678548 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 11.7677419355 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 58.1214874552 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.62 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.0537634409 60% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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