Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on whether students should have a long vacation or not. While some scholars prefer to have many short vacations in the year, I hold the opposite view. Personally, I think students should have one long vacation each year.
To begin with, when students have a long vacation, they will get more entertainments. They will have the chance to discover the city that they visit and enjoy spending much time over there.
For instance, when I had two months vacations last year, I came to the United states and I took road trip between states. I went first to Niagara Fall and I enjoyed the waterfalls over there. Then, I drove to New York and visited the Time Square. Furthermore, I went to smoky mountains in Tennessee. Also, I was able to enjoy the walking river in San Antonio, Taxes. I did all that and I discovered many places because the long vacation that I had. On the other hand, If I had short vacation definitely I would not be able to travel around all these cities.
Adding to the previous point, when scholars have a long vacation, they will have the time to get relaxed. They will refresh their brains from the huge stress during the heavy study. For instance, if some students take long days to keep their brains calm and avoid any kinds of annoying thoughts, they would allow more tissues in the brain to develop and generate. Thus, they will come to the next semester more energetic and eager to learn and accept information.
On top of that, when students take a long vacation, they will save their budget. There are many tourists companies that offer an enormous discount when people book for more than three weeks. For example, last times I tried to make a hotel reservation through Priceline application. At first, the price was $300 per night for only three days in Las Vegas. However, the price dramatically dropped when I booked for three weeks. It was only $50 per night. Apparently, scholars will save cash when they take a long vacation each year.
In conclusion, I encourage students to get one long vacation each year. This is not only because they will enjoy more but also, they will get relaxed and save their budget.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64781491003 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37701505401 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511568123393 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8430234199 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.32 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.56 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.12 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223273889515 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759589960757 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105279786145 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14319286209 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115401826696 0.0645574589148 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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