Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Nowadays, almost everyone go to university for a degree. Having a degree has an important role in managing to find a job. Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes; others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Even though a lot of people believe that going to classes should be optional for students because students have more time to work and gain experiences; I completely believe that students should be required to attend classes for two important reasons that are discussed in the following paragraphs.
The main reason is that students can learn some skills. Some skills such as presentation skill, doing research, and how to do research are not learnt without going to classes. For example, in my university, one of my courses, compiler lab course, was optional for students to attend class. Because in that semester I had worked in a company, that produces software for factories, I did not attend in that course. The teacher determined a presentation for the students, and also he taught them how they can have a good presentation. Since I did not attend in that course I did not learn how I present in front of a lot of audience. As you can see, if I attended the class, I would able to present a good speech.
Another reason is that students can ask teacher right away. It is very obvious that if students attend classes, if they have a problem they can ask the teacher right away. For example, when I was a student, studying Artificial Intelligence which defines as systems that can act like a human and are able to learn, I had a course which is called Image Processing Lab course, I always attend the class and as soon as I had a problem, I asked the teacher right away. At the end of term I was very convenient with this course but my friend, Mahdi, who did not go to the classes, had a lot of problem during the week exam, and he had to ask me to help him with his question. Finally, I get a good score but my friend failed the exam. In that semester I graduated but my friend had to enroll for the next semester because of the lab course. This experience taught him that always attends all classes.
In sum, I definitely agree with the idea that students should be required attend classes. Not only can they learn some skills but they also can ask the teacher right away. Universities should force students to attend all of their classes.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219917012448 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.180497925311 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0435684647303 0.0866891130778 50% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0580912863071 0.046263068375 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0767634854772 0.0685040099705 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116182572614 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0269709543568 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54939937592 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352697095436 0.0309702414327 114% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0954356846473 0.0887237588012 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0311203319502 0.0209618222197 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0207468879668 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2444.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 435.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6183908046 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344827586207 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23908045977 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16091954023 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0666666666667 0.112833075102 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54939937592 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422988505747 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.8685766873 59.2087087015 77% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7142857143 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3204069406 48.84282405 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.380952381 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.644075263715 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 44.6223316913 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.15131578947 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468588292251 0.300154397459 156% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139766631222 0.103427244359 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.153304331687 0.0752933317313 204% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.465406197132 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166805606031 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174462721061 0.114077575197 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17810239852 0.0781384742642 228% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.392955882816 0.336927656856 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0542486237561 0.067059652881 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354750767787 0.210909579961 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181606496967 0.0618886996521 293% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.75985663082 362% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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